“MY
BEAUTIFUL DAYS”
Everyday make me feel tired, but all of my
days are beautiful for me. As usual,I wake up at 5.00 a.m and be my routine to
clean up my room first. My weekdays is really busy, but now I start to go to my
campus at 8.00 a.m. So, I have enough time to get breakfast. Because in my
opinion, it is important to eat something in the morning, and we need a lot
nutrition to begin our activities.
My days in Campus is more uninterested. Especially
,if I have teacher who talks too much but doesn’t care with their students, but
I meet with all of my amazing friends there that make everything easy.
At 11.00 a.m ,I get home. Although I feel
that I need rest or sleep ,I do not do that, because this time for me to watch
my favorite program on television. It is a reality show :D
On Monday to Thursday I give a private
lesson,start from 4.30 p.m until 6.30 p.m. This is the most I like than other
of all my daily routines, I can share my knowledge with my student ,or just
have a small talk with him. In free time ,we play a game in computer to relax
our brain. It is different, but that’s the fact, we become friends sometimes.
And the weekend arrives ! I feel the sun
shines brighter than ever. I forget about the assignments, teacher
lectures, and the theory that makes drunk. Usually ,I spend all of my time in
front of my computer ,or just meet friends to share about everything .We can go
out,or just decide to stay at home, and cook something. In short, I always feel
pleased and excited have tiring days, because
I have many friends to share it with.
your text is interesting. but there is one less space in your text. As usual,I wake up at 5.00 a.m and be my routine to clean up my room first. if you write As usual, I wake up at 5.00 a.m and be my routine to clean up my room first. maybe your text is more perfect. :D
BalasHapusThank you sooo much Dear .. You've remind me how important the space :D
BalasHapusWow your text is insanely awesome.. :thumbup
BalasHapusI Almost can't find any mistakes on it..
But, it would be more nice if you add one word on this sentence "the theory that makes drunk" ----> "the theory that makes 'me' drunk"
:D
Okey thank you Ferry for your nice comment :)
BalasHapus